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Sometimes More by Deborah Hicks
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byslantedlight.livejournal.comSometimes More by Deborah Hicks
Oooh, one of my favourite kinds of fic - it pulled me immediately, I was straight away part of the rush of feeling between our lads...
...and then it got a bit... soppy? Cliched? Mills-and-Boon-ish? Outspokenly sentimental? Don't tell us - show us, just like the lads do in the eps...
And Doyle is not "the smaller half of the team" - *headdesk* I know what the author's trying to say, but... *headdesk*
But then the ending is much better, and I was all smiling again at the second part of the final sentence!
So - yeah, worth reading for those few gem-ish moments... *g*
Oooh, one of my favourite kinds of fic - it pulled me immediately, I was straight away part of the rush of feeling between our lads...
...and then it got a bit... soppy? Cliched? Mills-and-Boon-ish? Outspokenly sentimental? Don't tell us - show us, just like the lads do in the eps...
And Doyle is not "the smaller half of the team" - *headdesk* I know what the author's trying to say, but... *headdesk*
But then the ending is much better, and I was all smiling again at the second part of the final sentence!
So - yeah, worth reading for those few gem-ish moments... *g*
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