Beta Central - One of Three by Rozel
Aug. 14th, 2012 10:54 pmSorry I'm late - I managed to come down with a cold yesterday, and in my busy-ness of sulking at it, everything just slipped my mind... I'm hoping that better late than never might apply here...
As far as I know, Rozel is interested in general comments and any kind of constructive criticism for the story. For those who've not played before, the idea is that Beta Central is a way of gathering all kinds of constructive editorial comments on a story, that might help make it better (obviously that's going to be subjective, and the final version may or may not take the suggestions into account - that's all up to the author). It's always useful to have another eye read a story for wee things we might have missed - a missing comma or mis-placed full-stop, sentences that read strangely, sentences that read brilliantly and we'd like more of, twists that might make something more realistic, or fantastical, or fascinating or homely... any comments at all are welcome! Our collective Beta Central has been beautifully and gently constructively critical in the past, so I'm sure it'll all go swimmingly this time too...
The story is beneath the cut - what do you think?!
( One of Three )
As far as I know, Rozel is interested in general comments and any kind of constructive criticism for the story. For those who've not played before, the idea is that Beta Central is a way of gathering all kinds of constructive editorial comments on a story, that might help make it better (obviously that's going to be subjective, and the final version may or may not take the suggestions into account - that's all up to the author). It's always useful to have another eye read a story for wee things we might have missed - a missing comma or mis-placed full-stop, sentences that read strangely, sentences that read brilliantly and we'd like more of, twists that might make something more realistic, or fantastical, or fascinating or homely... any comments at all are welcome! Our collective Beta Central has been beautifully and gently constructively critical in the past, so I'm sure it'll all go swimmingly this time too...
The story is beneath the cut - what do you think?!
( One of Three )