Pros Novel Read-Along - Waiting to Fall by Rob - Chapters 16-20

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oops - I should have posted this on Monday, but I got caught up in talking about the story, and then I should have posted it on Tuesday, only I got caught up in work, and... But I'm pretty sure you will have worked it out anyway. *g*

We'll carry on with Chapter 16 to the end of Chapter 20 this weekend!

Comments

[tinturtle]

Some chapters they are, too.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Lol - yes! *g*

[jat-sapphire.livejournal.com]

I over-read a little. I don't know how to feel about this presentation of Ann. I guess her father wasn't a baddie in this AU? Seems odd how she dumped Doyle for being a bent cop if her father was a regular spiral staircase. So instead he's a madman of a stereotypically crazy sort. Wanting to kill her boyfriends. I'm creeped out. And it is awfully convenient from a slash point of view. But kind of ... well. A bigger emotional obstacle than makes entire sense to me.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

The one time I wait until tonight to post, and someone's here early! *g* You couldn't copy this over to the review post (https://ci5hq.livejournal.com/396717.html) by any chance? *g*