Big smile! Perfect miscommunication and jumping to conclusions! I adore the thought of Bodie being so very happy with him and Doyle wondering why! Lovely.
I love the mumbling of the lad and that his mother didn't realize it. And I must admit I didn't realize it either. I had to go back to the beginning of the story and re-read the first lines to find the mistake. *g*
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Date: 2019-12-23 08:39 pm (UTC)Thanks for looking. :-)
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Date: 2019-12-23 07:40 pm (UTC)Big smile! Perfect miscommunication and jumping to conclusions! I adore the thought of Bodie being so very happy with him and Doyle wondering why! Lovely.
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