Today's story is Christmas Snow by PFL. I love how the snow changes Doyles mood and the thought of them hunting one another in the snow with snowballs shows me, that even tough CI5 agents could sometimes be like happy little children.
And of course the end. I love this lines at the end.
>He fumbled for his toothbrush, cleaning industriously, and it was only as he was putting it away that he noticed the color.
Blue. He stard at it. Blue. His eyes travelled to the toothbrush holder above his sink.
"Oi. Get your mitts off me brush."
Bodie swung around, nearly falling with the violence of the movement. Doyle was draped in the doorway, leaning against it, arms crossed, eyebrows raised. <
For me this lines say all and you now, with the snow came the happy ending.
And of course the end. I love this lines at the end.
>He fumbled for his toothbrush, cleaning industriously, and it was only as he was putting it away that he noticed the color.
Blue. He stard at it. Blue. His eyes travelled to the toothbrush holder above his sink.
"Oi. Get your mitts off me brush."
Bodie swung around, nearly falling with the violence of the movement. Doyle was draped in the doorway, leaning against it, arms crossed, eyebrows raised. <
For me this lines say all and you now, with the snow came the happy ending.
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Date: 2017-12-14 10:53 pm (UTC)And the blue toothbrush would have been an image for another of my "Guess The Story" versions. And I'm sure you would have known it then. :-)
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Date: 2017-12-15 09:47 am (UTC):-)))
(it's one of the fics I made an "e-book-cover" for *g*)
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Date: 2017-12-16 04:44 am (UTC)Thank you!