On Sebastian's website, the story Siren is accompanied by notes which declare that it "contains the worst line written by any slash writer ever, in the history of fandom." I've read the story a few times, and I haven't been able to figure out which line that is. Does anyone know?
My previous question has set me wondering: Are there any lines from fics you have read that you find particularly memorable? What are they, and why do you think they have stuck with you?