Reading Room XVI - A Pardon After Execution by Pamela Rose

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Todays Reading Room story is A Pardon After Excecution by Pamela Rose. The story takes place after the end of The Ojuka Situation, when Bodie and Doyle stand there and Doyle inspects his burned wrists. And at that scene in the episode I always thought "Wait, what happened to Parker? Where is he?" and here it's Doyle asking the same question. Where is Parker?

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Then follows a longer scene with nice banter between the lads, but what follows at Doyle's home doesn't fit for me.

( Sex-scene )

( Katrina )

( Doyle hurt )

Okay, let's come to the next scene which I calle "The Game Scene"

( The Game Scene )

( Next. )

( The end, at least )

All in all I must say it would never be one of my favourite stories, but it isn't an absolut no-go either. I'm really not sure about this story. It is very well written and I love the banter. For me Pamela Rose has a good way to describe what happens, but in some ways it was too much for me. Let me know what you think. Do you like the story (and why)? Or is it a no-go story for you? Would you recommend it? Am I to fussy again? Let's talk about it. :-)