Prosfic Rec Challenge - If by Ashlea

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

I found something by Ashlea: "If"

www.thecircuitarchive.com/tca/archive/1/if.html

It's about the question: "How you would spend your last four minutes if they ever declared nuclear war anywhere?"

Bodie doesn't want to answer this question, and at last, after a funny dialogue ("What was the question?" "Who was the question." "Who what?") Doyle urged him to answer it. And we all know it will be the right answer... 

So they are having it off in the wood and in the bed and if they didn't have to sleep a bit, they would go on happily ever after.

Nice to read, this story.

Comments

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

Nice to read, this story.
Yes it is, isn't it! Short and sweet and to the point, no saccharine - very nice to read indeed.

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

Oh yes - one spoonful of sugar in a story is sweet, five would be saccharine *g*.

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

That was just so darned cute! I loved it. Thanks!

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

It was a pleasure for both of us!

[roven75.livejournal.com]

Ah I remember this one - really like the idea behind it, and the realization too.

"...a kind of verbal tag, and Doyle was it." *g*

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

Yes, and "Doyle-baiting was a favorite pastime with him" ...

[cloudless-9193.livejournal.com]

Very nice, and there are some hilarious dialogues. :-)

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

Oh yes those dialogues...

"Well?"

"Well, what?"

"Would you?"

"What?"

[cloudless-9193.livejournal.com]

Or this one :-)

"I want to ask you something."

Doyle managed to open his eyes a little way.

"No, I can't get it up three times in a row. You've had all I can give you, greedy sod!"