If this wasn't the first BDSM story that I read, then it was the first that made me think, 'so that's what it's all about!'
I liked the language that was used. I don't really like women being called slappers, but it did set the mood for me. The short, needy sentences helped to convey the way Ray's mind is working, as if that's all he can concentrate on at this time.
Even though it would seem that Bodie is the one in control, it's made perfectly clear that Ray wants and needs it as much as his partner. At no time is he scared of Bodie, and after they've fucked Bodie ensures that Ray is okay before they go on their way. If that's not love, I don't know what is!
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Date: 2009-04-16 11:57 am (UTC)I liked the language that was used. I don't really like women being called slappers, but it did set the mood for me. The short, needy sentences helped to convey the way Ray's mind is working, as if that's all he can concentrate on at this time.
Even though it would seem that Bodie is the one in control, it's made perfectly clear that Ray wants and needs it as much as his partner. At no time is he scared of Bodie, and after they've fucked Bodie ensures that Ray is okay before they go on their way. If that's not love, I don't know what is!
Yeah, I liked this one. Thanks for the re-read :)