Request for Beta and Brit Check

[jgraeme2007.livejournal.com]

 I can't remember the proper procedure on this, so I apologize if this is the wrong approach. I have a friend (and it really is a friend, not me) requesting a beta and Brit-check on a couple of stories. I've glanced them over, and I think they're very promising, but I have no time to work on them myself as of yet -- although I'll probably lend a hand at some point. Would someone be willing to -- mostly -- Brit check these? 

You can reach me through my LJ account. 

Thanks in advance for any help.