If I think about any little part of this story too hard, then it doesn't at all seem real... jat_sapphire said she noticed a big difference in reading it fast all at once, and reading it a chapter at a time. I'm not entirely sure I like it myself! I suppose when we're not talking about it, I can just glide past alot of the problems that arise when I think about them too hard... *g*
This author often seems to traumatise the lads to a huge extent, and I'm not convinced that they could actually be in CI5 with some of the things she's done to them in stories! At least this Bodie isn't constantly having epileptic fits, and Doyle's back isn't locking up at inopportunte moments!
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Date: 2019-05-17 02:57 pm (UTC)This author often seems to traumatise the lads to a huge extent, and I'm not convinced that they could actually be in CI5 with some of the things she's done to them in stories! At least this Bodie isn't constantly having epileptic fits, and Doyle's back isn't locking up at inopportunte moments!