It could be written, but I think it won't work in the last few paragraphs of Chapter 10.
The world of the story needs to make room for it. Maybe Bodie just KNEW where Doyle spent the night. Maybe they always know when one of them is outside the other one's door. Maybe Doyle used to know when Gabe was unhappy and when he was serene. I mean, we have psychic-bond-with-wolf stories. But this one hasn't made the room for this, or else I need a call-back to remember it so I'm thinking, "Aww!" instead of "Oh, come on!"
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Date: 2019-05-16 12:40 pm (UTC)The world of the story needs to make room for it. Maybe Bodie just KNEW where Doyle spent the night. Maybe they always know when one of them is outside the other one's door. Maybe Doyle used to know when Gabe was unhappy and when he was serene. I mean, we have psychic-bond-with-wolf stories. But this one hasn't made the room for this, or else I need a call-back to remember it so I'm thinking, "Aww!" instead of "Oh, come on!"