Thank you - I'm better enough to think about the discussion properly now, anyway! *g*
I liked this chapter too, much better than the previous ones. It feels a bit as if we're settling down with who our lads really are now. Even the thing that bugged me - Bodie-superhero - is settling down a bit more, and he's more human, and also Doyle is a bit more equally superhero, too. *g*
And with the famous last words, "Congratulations... You won the golden lemon." starts their partnership. :-) Yes! That makes me smile actually - it has begun! *g*
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Date: 2019-04-17 10:29 pm (UTC)I liked this chapter too, much better than the previous ones. It feels a bit as if we're settling down with who our lads really are now. Even the thing that bugged me - Bodie-superhero - is settling down a bit more, and he's more human, and also Doyle is a bit more equally superhero, too. *g*
And with the famous last words, "Congratulations... You won the golden lemon." starts their partnership. :-)
Yes! That makes me smile actually - it has begun! *g*