Thank you for writing this introduction! I hope you're feeling much much better now!
I like this chapter! It' powerful writing and never boring. Maybe you could argue about this and that, and if it's Bodie or not. If Doyle is too scared in the night. But nothing could throw me out of this story so far. I love stories of how they met.
And with the famous last words, "Congratulations... You won the golden lemon." starts their partnership. :-)
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Date: 2019-04-17 08:39 pm (UTC)I like this chapter!
It' powerful writing and never boring.
Maybe you could argue about this and that, and if it's Bodie or not. If Doyle is too scared in the night.
But nothing could throw me out of this story so far. I love stories of how they met.
And with the famous last words, "Congratulations... You won the golden lemon." starts their partnership. :-)