I don't know about anyone else (and I can't find an actual example), but overall I'm finding some of the writing slightly convoluted in that it's sometimes unclear who is saying what and to whoooooom, and I find myself reading something several times just to make sure I'm right in what I'm thinking. I wonder if this is one of the things golden_bastet refers to earlier in her 'fine tuning' comment? I'd love to know.
So - what do you reckon?! Does this read as our Bodie and Doyle? Is it realistic? What do we think of Bodie's apparent change of heart after the revelation of the last chapter - "Thinks he's made a friend. Spare me." Are you believing in the story?
I think it's gradually becoming more canon Bodie and Doyle. Bodie's change of heart? God knows... perhaps the pressure is off very slightly, or he just feels more comfortable doing what he's doing out in the wild, surviving?
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Date: 2019-04-17 07:59 pm (UTC)So - what do you reckon?! Does this read as our Bodie and Doyle? Is it realistic? What do we think of Bodie's apparent change of heart after the revelation of the last chapter - "Thinks he's made a friend. Spare me." Are you believing in the story?
I think it's gradually becoming more canon Bodie and Doyle. Bodie's change of heart? God knows... perhaps the pressure is off very slightly, or he just feels more comfortable doing what he's doing out in the wild, surviving?