I agree with all of you and everything is said about this cruel and unfamiliar Bodie. But, like Shooting2kill said, it is fan fiction which means playing with the characters. I don't like this Bodie, but I am thrilled by the sentence:
The pointis this -- can you persuadeoneof thosemen out there that he likes you well enough, respectsand trust you enough, to want to work with you ?
Maybe Angelfish made it a bit stronger by intensification his behaviours.
At the end of chapter one, I have to admitt, I was a bit shocked, pushed off the story, but I hope, because of Cowley's statement, it will become an interesting and brilliant reading.
The scene with the first touch between these two is already brilliant.
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Date: 2019-04-06 08:49 pm (UTC)I agree with all of you and everything is said about this cruel and unfamiliar Bodie.
But, like Shooting2kill said, it is fan fiction which means playing with the characters.
I don't like this Bodie, but I am thrilled by the sentence:
The point is this -- can you persuade one of those men out there that he likes you well enough, respects and trust you enough, to want to work with you ?
Maybe Angelfish made it a bit stronger by intensification his behaviours.
At the end of chapter one, I have to admitt, I was a bit shocked, pushed off the story, but I hope, because of Cowley's statement, it will become an interesting and brilliant reading.
The scene with the first touch between these two is already brilliant.