"I am irritated by the amount of time devoted to Cowley's manipulations with no conclusion or follow-up. Why don't we get some hint of what he actually wants? Once the sexual relationship is established the rest of the story is abandoned. Yes, I agree. That's why I'm not too keen on (some)'fist time slash stories'. Often you have that phenomenon, that the moment the two are united, there is a big sigh and everything else is no longer important.
I really would like to know what happens next with Cowley's chair!
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Date: 2011-07-15 09:21 am (UTC)Yes, I agree. That's why I'm not too keen on (some)'fist time slash stories'.
Often you have that phenomenon, that the moment the two are united, there is a big sigh and everything else is no longer important.
I really would like to know what happens next with Cowley's chair!