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All These Years
Title: All These Years
Author: Angelfish
Link to story: http://www.thecircuitarchive.com/tca/archive/16/allthese.html
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Short review: See comments below!
Author: Angelfish
Link to story: http://www.thecircuitarchive.com/tca/archive/16/allthese.html
Zine:
Short review: See comments below!
God, this one just blew me away. For me it delivers on all counts: characterisation, plot, pacing and prose. And she manages what apparently is extremely difficult to do, namely writing a damaged, hurting, vulnerable Ray Doyle without emasculating him. And the ending just... Yes, that is what I imagine will happen to them in the end. Just like that.
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