ext_8846 ([identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ci5hq 2019-04-07 12:06 pm (UTC)

No, I meant that Doyle would be the sub. Yes, he does react to being touched, but even that seems an over-reaction, especially since he then realizes that what Bodie did was correct. But the foundation she sets for his character was a bit too soft for me. I realize that they were teenagers, but closer to men than boys. It was easier for me to imagine two very young boys, closer to thirteen than sixteen.

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