ext_61068 ([identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ci5hq 2011-07-14 09:58 am (UTC)

Thanks for your thoughtful introduction. I enjoyed the chance to re-read the story. I hadn't enjoyed it much the first time around, despite it seemingly pressing a lot of my buttons - older B & D still together and in CI5. It's still not a story I'd go back to often, mainly because I don't 'hear' my lads in the story - the fic could do with Brit-checking, and some Americanisms in Bodie's thoughts throw me out every time. The speech patterns don't quite ring true for me.

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