ext_110375 ([identity profile] jgraeme2007.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ci5hq 2010-02-03 04:21 pm (UTC)

*happy dancing*

I love heavy spoiling! So - I have the day 'snow free' - now I read your rec properly - then the story!


Hanging my head in shame. I do think spoilers are inevitable in serious review or discussion of a story, but I did intent to have them under the cut. I forgot about the warning.

Perfect! :-)

(But I already can agree that it IS sometimes unclear who's speaking, although I normally enjoy omniscient POV.)


Other than the minimal and sometimes confusing lack of names, she does a nice job with it -- but then I am partial to it (when it's done well).

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